Monday, January 5, 2009

Ocean


Life is like water
friends make it feel better
Adding hatred causes it to be bitter
but happiness always found later
I stopped feeling litter
and eating tater :P
now made me love being emotion matter
but some times makes you feel greater
so life flows to ocean just like in oater

This post is the result for the wonderful talk to dolls(smriti) all from the past 3 days..and i dedicate to her because today afternoon she is the one who gave me the word ocean and make a post :)...

5 Point Something
5 Things abt Dolls(Smriti)

1.She is Bubbly
2.She is senti (like i am :))(but she hates me when i am senti:P)
3.She is beautiful in her heart
4.Sweeter then the sweet
5.Most lovable person

37 comments:

Yamini Meduri said...

nice poem...!!!

this time i cant write anything...i dont know smriti yaar....i lost and you won Hemanth...!!!

it was truly a nice work..!!!

SMRITI said...

awwwww Hemz...That was sooooo sweeeeet :)

I was hoping to comment first :( Anyways, this was just sooooo wonderful...thank you so much....Now you'll definitely get to taste my sabudana vadas wen u come here :)

Errr Yamini, dont give up yet...Lets talk and you can at least give it a shot .. :P

Anwesa said...

a nice poem here..n yes,a cheerful 5 pointer too..

Cess said...

i hope she s happy to have a friend like u.

Anonymous said...

you touch people's hearts man.. no wonder you rock with your emotions

Arv said...

lol@ the '-ters'... good one though mate... cheers...

V. Archana said...

nice one :)

i gotcha know dolls to give her the five. Nevertheless im bad at it ;)

anyways,good day!! :)

Arunima said...

Hemu....nice poem.
you r correct, life is so much like water.

P.S How r u & hw was ur new year celebrations?

Nikhil Menon said...

hehe..good one..!!

see,i told you rite?? "Most loved soul in the blogosphere!!??" :)

cheers..!!

joie de vivre said...

hmm
ab toh smriti se baat karna hi padegi
:P

Aneesh said...

Nice one again. You always come up with poem that rhymes well.
That is indeed a talent
:P

swati said...

hey hemu tat was soo sweet..
u have so much space 4 evry1 in ur heart..vadhiyan hai..
keep rocking.
:)

Lucifer said...

i really like this 5 point somethin thingy u r doin on ur posts nowdayz...cool :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

@yamini

thnks :)...dont loose soo soon :)...

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@dolls

hugs :)..

ok i will take the insurance u asked me to take before eating those :)..

yeh yamini should give a shot :).

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@anwesa..

thnks anwe :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@cess

she will be soo happy i know now :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@chriz

thnks mate :)...thats sweet of u to say :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@arv

thnks mate...:)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@archana

thnks archu...

u to have a good day :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@arunima

:)..true

i am doin fine buddy ..how r u doin now :)..how were ur holidays :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@menon


thnks for the sweet comment man :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@neha

be on the issue of interacting with her :P....

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@aneesh

one thing r u praising or scolding :P...thnks da :).

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@swati

:) thnks sweety :)...

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@mayz


yeh i love my idea my self :)...thnks mate :)..

urs..hemu..

Devika Jyothi said...

Hi Hemz,

whenever I reach you, i go back with a smile...

You are a cute one :)

Nice picture there, Hemu

yours,
devika

Saranya S said...

That was a nice poem Hemanth :) Keep up.

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ said...

ahan nice kavita and then too with nice explanation of cuteness of a cute girl

something fishy :P >>>huh???

Hemanth Potluri said...

@devika

:) thnks for the sweet comment :)...it was sweet and lovely :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@saranya

:)...thnks yaar..


urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@kochu

thnks da :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@sourish

nothing fishy :P...

thnks :)..

urs..hemu..

Sameera Ansari said...

Sweet dedication :)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

cute cute :)

Arunima said...

@Hemu
My holidays were good. had a nice time with family.
:)

Vani said...

Very nice poem hemanth :) Indeed life is like flowing water.