Sunday, October 11, 2009

Hospital

He opened his eyes to see her standing in front of him with tears filled in her eyes. she hugs him tightly and says” I Love you”. He was confused ...the last he remembers he was riding the bike...He looks into her eyes and asks “where am I?” withholding tears she says “in The Hospital”

16 comments:

Anwesa said...

sad but at least he's with her....

Priya Joyce said...

:(:( hmmmm..bt ya..tey're together ..

Pramoda Meduri said...

:)..so nice of u for posting this..am happy for both of them, some perils brings two hearts more closer..:)

Dhanya said...

:(

swati said...

Touching!!

Suree said...

well written..

SMRITI said...

Too much Hemz!! All 55 fiction these days haan??

Was real neat. Keep it up dude! Write more of these :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

@anwesa

yes sis atleast he is with her now..:)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@priya

dont be sad next time they will be happily singing :).

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@pramoda

thanks :)...the hearts are always together :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@dhanya

dont be sad ...comeon have a smile he is with her now :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@swati

yes yaar but they are together :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@suree

thanks bro :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@smriti

:)...nahi yaar sab kuch 55 fiction nahi hena ...thum kaisa hai...nice to see u here dolls :)..

will try to write more...:)..

urs..hemu..

Margie said...

Keep writing!
Good job!

Margie:)

Hemanth Potluri said...

@margie

thanks buddy :)..

urs..hemu..