Sunday, March 1, 2009

Missed Call


24th feb..
uneasiness is filled in his heart...he could not just sit in one place...his mind was roaming some where in the dark side...he looked at his cell phone it says 34 missed calls...he dint know what to answer his friend who has called him so many times..he looks at the watch it says 6.30 Pm...he tries to call her back ..but she does not lift the call...again uneasiness filled ..he just puts his cell in his back pack and leaves it on the table...he wanted to say he was not feeling good..but some words he promised that he will never be sad struck him and he kept being mute the whole day...at night when he looks back into the cell he finds 25 missed calls..he blames himself for leaving the cell phone and sends a message as its already late in the night...just a gud night message..
25th feb
he could not sleep much as the missed call is still roaming in his mind..the first thing in the morning he wakes up to make the call ...but he is not sure how /wat to tell her abt not picking up the call....but at last he makes the call and says he wa not in a good mood and still he lies saying that and hiding the truth....she thinks he might have fallen into negative thoughts once again...and ignores saying ..."u always are negative"...he feels bad abt hiding the truth ...but he thought he will say it after its all over...
26th feb
the whole day he spends looking through the glass on to a bed...he gets many calls from the friend...he dint know how he could speak to her when he is filled in sorrows himself...he is not negative but he is sad because of a reason...he sends out a message saying he will get back to her..but she keeps calling him and he cuts the call which really makes a bad impression on her mind thinking he is making fun of her...she sends messages saying "oh u wanted to play cut call game"...he feels bad but he has no other option but to cut ...as he is in a hospital...he wanted to say that...but that may still increase the tension in his frnd...he dint want her to feel tensed.....but around night he gets a message " This is the last message i am sending i will never talk to u again"....he tries to call her back with nothing but she not picking up....he comes back home around 11 and then he comes to know she tried calling on his land line and feels bad tat he should told her the reason...
27th feb
the whole day he is trying to reach her and she does not respond to him....he goes into a bad depression mood..he tries to keep his smiling face ..but the mood is even shown in his talk...he feels depressed he tries to calm himself ...he mails her he calls her..he texts her...but the response is wain...she just tells she wont talk ever again...the whole day he feels sad...with tears flowing from eyes and heart.....
the reason behind not picking the call is...he was in a hospital...his frnd met with a accident ...he was almost pulled into coma..the doctors had brought back him and given hope of life...he dint want his Friends to know that he was in a hospital and may be they will think its him on the bed....he is still hoping for the friendship to get back to normal..

31 comments:

yamini meduri said...

thats a sad story..!!!

i am unable to write an apropriate word that can describe the way i am feeling now..!!!

nyways....thats a good write..!!!

Anwesa said...

really ironic,pathetic,poignant yet meticulously planned!!u write gud stories..

swati said...

i guess u knw wat i have to say...so keep trying :) anyways a good write up there..
i feel friendship cannot be broken so easily..n its equally painful for both the sides..well i guess this story is still incomplete..coz stories look good when they have happy endings..so where is the happy part hemz?i hope it will come up soon..:)
good day..

Lucifer said...

i hope this is jus a story

Archana said...

hmm... what a story.
is all the just a myth or....??
don't ya think,it was too much of a delay for the guy to tell the reason to the girl. Coz,i dont think so,even if she wud have known the reason,it wudnt have made much of a difference to her,coz she knows the guy and not his friend.

hmm,anyways... good story!! i hope everything gets back to normal... coz i feel this isnt just a story but a real happening.

take care,buddy!!

Devika Jyothi said...

Why did they invent mobile phones at all!

such a nuisance! :(

btw, guess this is a story -- and you are fine Hemu. (that its not a reflection of your mood) :)


yours,
devika

Hemanth Potluri said...

@yamini

i to dint get the apropriate title thats y its a 'miss"ed call

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@anwesa

thnks anwe :)..i am learning from u guys :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@swati

happy ending is coming very soon :)...u to have a good week ahead..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@mayz

i to hope it becomes a story :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@cockandbulls

thnks for passing by :)...nothing is a story dude...everything is made from real :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@devika

mobiles sometimes give u the best thing u know...u can share some happy moments instantly..but some times it hurts to...

mood sometimes reflects wat we write...i guess i am ok :)..

urs..hemu..

Nikhil Menon said...

awwwwwww saad!!

Though I loved the whole journey of it.. :)

Take care bro,coz I care..

Nikhil

Hemanth Potluri said...

@menon

good u enjoyed the journey...sadness is not permanent..

tc..

urs..hemu..

Arv said...

ah... those inner struggles... its easy to comment on it reading it... but thinking back on the past, I can relate to what was written here...

beautiful mate... hope you didnt go thro it for real... take care... cheers...

Jessica said...

Sad, but good writing!

Cess said...

good story, at some points i really thought it was based on a true story....
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Keshi said...

All the best for ur future endeavours Hemanth! See u when I see u next and I dunno when that will be. TC!

Keshi.

Bhai with Chai said...

different.. and though it sounds real.. i hope you say it is just a story!
besties! :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

@arv

yeh i know some words bring past over the eyes...hope its not true for me to :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@jessi

long time no see..hu!..thnks buddy :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@cess

stories are from life..:)...tc

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@sweets

thank u sweets..hope ur not angry on me for something...u tc of ur self :)...will miss u for sure..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@bhaiwithchai..

i thought u just forgot me...and suddenly u pop up :)..good to see ya :)...yeh stories are made from real life :)..

urs..hemu..

prajyot said...

m really getting speachless..nicely written mr.Hemu..i feel that after valentine u been growing nicely with ur feelings...!!!

kya chakkar hein?

Hemanth Potluri said...

@prajyot..

lol :P...nothing much bro...just a feel i put in words...nothing related to love...i am still single..:P...:)..nice to see ya here..tc..

urs..hemu..

V. Archana said...

justt a feel i believe... :-|
bloody bugger :D

Hemanth Potluri said...

@archana

yehhh buger its a feel :P..

urs..hemu..

joie de vivre said...

hope things are resloved now

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