24th feb..
uneasiness is filled in his heart...he could not just sit in one place...his mind was roaming some where in the dark side...he looked at his cell phone it says 34 missed calls...he dint know what to answer his friend who has called him so many times..he looks at the watch it says 6.30 Pm...he tries to call her back ..but she does not lift the call...again uneasiness filled ..he just puts his cell in his back pack and leaves it on the table...he wanted to say he was not feeling good..but some words he promised that he will never be sad struck him and he kept being mute the whole day...at night when he looks back into the cell he finds 25 missed calls..he blames himself for leaving the cell phone and sends a message as its already late in the night...just a gud night message..
25th feb
he could not sleep much as the missed call is still roaming in his mind..the first thing in the morning he wakes up to make the call ...but he is not sure how /wat to tell her abt not picking up the call....but at last he makes the call and says he wa not in a good mood and still he lies saying that and hiding the truth....she thinks he might have fallen into negative thoughts once again...and ignores saying ..."u always are negative"...he feels bad abt hiding the truth ...but he thought he will say it after its all over...
26th feb
the whole day he spends looking through the glass on to a bed...he gets many calls from the friend...he dint know how he could speak to her when he is filled in sorrows himself...he is not negative but he is sad because of a reason...he sends out a message saying he will get back to her..but she keeps calling him and he cuts the call which really makes a bad impression on her mind thinking he is making fun of her...she sends messages saying "oh u wanted to play cut call game"...he feels bad but he has no other option but to cut ...as he is in a hospital...he wanted to say that...but that may still increase the tension in his frnd...he dint want her to feel tensed.....but around night he gets a message " This is the last message i am sending i will never talk to u again"....he tries to call her back with nothing but she not picking up....he comes back home around 11 and then he comes to know she tried calling on his land line and feels bad tat he should told her the reason...
27th feb
the whole day he is trying to reach her and she does not respond to him....he goes into a bad depression mood..he tries to keep his smiling face ..but the mood is even shown in his talk...he feels depressed he tries to calm himself ...he mails her he calls her..he texts her...but the response is wain...she just tells she wont talk ever again...the whole day he feels sad...with tears flowing from eyes and heart.....
the reason behind not picking the call is...he was in a hospital...his frnd met with a accident ...he was almost pulled into coma..the doctors had brought back him and given hope of life...he dint want his Friends to know that he was in a hospital and may be they will think its him on the bed....he is still hoping for the friendship to get back to normal..
uneasiness is filled in his heart...he could not just sit in one place...his mind was roaming some where in the dark side...he looked at his cell phone it says 34 missed calls...he dint know what to answer his friend who has called him so many times..he looks at the watch it says 6.30 Pm...he tries to call her back ..but she does not lift the call...again uneasiness filled ..he just puts his cell in his back pack and leaves it on the table...he wanted to say he was not feeling good..but some words he promised that he will never be sad struck him and he kept being mute the whole day...at night when he looks back into the cell he finds 25 missed calls..he blames himself for leaving the cell phone and sends a message as its already late in the night...just a gud night message..
25th feb
he could not sleep much as the missed call is still roaming in his mind..the first thing in the morning he wakes up to make the call ...but he is not sure how /wat to tell her abt not picking up the call....but at last he makes the call and says he wa not in a good mood and still he lies saying that and hiding the truth....she thinks he might have fallen into negative thoughts once again...and ignores saying ..."u always are negative"...he feels bad abt hiding the truth ...but he thought he will say it after its all over...
26th feb
the whole day he spends looking through the glass on to a bed...he gets many calls from the friend...he dint know how he could speak to her when he is filled in sorrows himself...he is not negative but he is sad because of a reason...he sends out a message saying he will get back to her..but she keeps calling him and he cuts the call which really makes a bad impression on her mind thinking he is making fun of her...she sends messages saying "oh u wanted to play cut call game"...he feels bad but he has no other option but to cut ...as he is in a hospital...he wanted to say that...but that may still increase the tension in his frnd...he dint want her to feel tensed.....but around night he gets a message " This is the last message i am sending i will never talk to u again"....he tries to call her back with nothing but she not picking up....he comes back home around 11 and then he comes to know she tried calling on his land line and feels bad tat he should told her the reason...
27th feb
the whole day he is trying to reach her and she does not respond to him....he goes into a bad depression mood..he tries to keep his smiling face ..but the mood is even shown in his talk...he feels depressed he tries to calm himself ...he mails her he calls her..he texts her...but the response is wain...she just tells she wont talk ever again...the whole day he feels sad...with tears flowing from eyes and heart.....
the reason behind not picking the call is...he was in a hospital...his frnd met with a accident ...he was almost pulled into coma..the doctors had brought back him and given hope of life...he dint want his Friends to know that he was in a hospital and may be they will think its him on the bed....he is still hoping for the friendship to get back to normal..
31 comments:
thats a sad story..!!!
i am unable to write an apropriate word that can describe the way i am feeling now..!!!
nyways....thats a good write..!!!
really ironic,pathetic,poignant yet meticulously planned!!u write gud stories..
i guess u knw wat i have to say...so keep trying :) anyways a good write up there..
i feel friendship cannot be broken so easily..n its equally painful for both the sides..well i guess this story is still incomplete..coz stories look good when they have happy endings..so where is the happy part hemz?i hope it will come up soon..:)
good day..
i hope this is jus a story
hmm... what a story.
is all the just a myth or....??
don't ya think,it was too much of a delay for the guy to tell the reason to the girl. Coz,i dont think so,even if she wud have known the reason,it wudnt have made much of a difference to her,coz she knows the guy and not his friend.
hmm,anyways... good story!! i hope everything gets back to normal... coz i feel this isnt just a story but a real happening.
take care,buddy!!
Why did they invent mobile phones at all!
such a nuisance! :(
btw, guess this is a story -- and you are fine Hemu. (that its not a reflection of your mood) :)
yours,
devika
@yamini
i to dint get the apropriate title thats y its a 'miss"ed call
urs..hemu..
@anwesa
thnks anwe :)..i am learning from u guys :)..
urs..hemu..
@swati
happy ending is coming very soon :)...u to have a good week ahead..
urs..hemu..
@mayz
i to hope it becomes a story :)..
urs..hemu..
@cockandbulls
thnks for passing by :)...nothing is a story dude...everything is made from real :)..
urs..hemu..
@devika
mobiles sometimes give u the best thing u know...u can share some happy moments instantly..but some times it hurts to...
mood sometimes reflects wat we write...i guess i am ok :)..
urs..hemu..
awwwwwww saad!!
Though I loved the whole journey of it.. :)
Take care bro,coz I care..
Nikhil
@menon
good u enjoyed the journey...sadness is not permanent..
tc..
urs..hemu..
ah... those inner struggles... its easy to comment on it reading it... but thinking back on the past, I can relate to what was written here...
beautiful mate... hope you didnt go thro it for real... take care... cheers...
Sad, but good writing!
good story, at some points i really thought it was based on a true story....
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All the best for ur future endeavours Hemanth! See u when I see u next and I dunno when that will be. TC!
Keshi.
different.. and though it sounds real.. i hope you say it is just a story!
besties! :)
@arv
yeh i know some words bring past over the eyes...hope its not true for me to :)..
urs..hemu..
@jessi
long time no see..hu!..thnks buddy :)..
urs..hemu..
@cess
stories are from life..:)...tc
urs..hemu..
@sweets
thank u sweets..hope ur not angry on me for something...u tc of ur self :)...will miss u for sure..
urs..hemu..
@bhaiwithchai..
i thought u just forgot me...and suddenly u pop up :)..good to see ya :)...yeh stories are made from real life :)..
urs..hemu..
m really getting speachless..nicely written mr.Hemu..i feel that after valentine u been growing nicely with ur feelings...!!!
kya chakkar hein?
@prajyot..
lol :P...nothing much bro...just a feel i put in words...nothing related to love...i am still single..:P...:)..nice to see ya here..tc..
urs..hemu..
justt a feel i believe... :-|
bloody bugger :D
@archana
yehhh buger its a feel :P..
urs..hemu..
hope things are resloved now
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