Its never late
to say I love You to your mate
don't depend on fate
it may sometimes lead to hate
its on u to open the gate
and be ready to sate
love does not have rate
even for a pate
it would be to late if u wait
so convey your message soon on a slate
to say I love You to your mate
don't depend on fate
it may sometimes lead to hate
its on u to open the gate
and be ready to sate
love does not have rate
even for a pate
it would be to late if u wait
so convey your message soon on a slate
The second one is done by my good friend A ...i took permission from her to put up the poem over here ...because i loved the theme with which she wrote it up :).i am puting up the poem and the theme as well :)....
Tu jo kabhi dekh na sakhe
Woh sach ki murath hu mein
Tu jo kabhi sun na sakhe
woh siskiyon ki Gunj hu mein
Chaah ke bhi tu jo chu na sakhe
woh Hawah ki aas hu mein
Tuj mein hi basi hu
teri hi kushi ki ehsaas hu mein
Jaano muhje, pehchaano mujhe
Teri hi saason ki dor hu mein
Woh sach ki murath hu mein
Tu jo kabhi sun na sakhe
woh siskiyon ki Gunj hu mein
Chaah ke bhi tu jo chu na sakhe
woh Hawah ki aas hu mein
Tuj mein hi basi hu
teri hi kushi ki ehsaas hu mein
Jaano muhje, pehchaano mujhe
Teri hi saason ki dor hu mein
Theme:You search me.......and you want to get me ......with your senses , but I am part of life.... its a waste you roam around for me. Discover yourself , andyou will find me there, the very meaning of your existence
urs..hemu..
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32 comments:
well! I hope now m original post don't become the "copy" version....:) Nice rhyme by you....and by the way you could have removed those dots....hm copy pasted it!:)
:)
Lot of shayari these days...mmm..
Good, Mr.Hemoet..
Try some prose too..;)
wat do d words-sate n pate mean?
the 2nd 1 is nice,we often 4get ur own soul,isn't?
wow yaar...this posting is very nice..truly beatiful.
hail hemath :P
wow...hemmzy dear is getting better and better with each poem...but almost every poem is related to romance...!! ;)
wah...jo bhi ladki ho, bahut lucky hai yaar....
teri kavitaen padhne ke baad tere baahon mein aa jaegi...aur kabhi nahin vapis jaegi...!! zindgi set...!! :)
nice words :)
tips?? for u?? seriously??
hmmm...ya actually...
dont rhyme the whole poem in one way...go for different rhymes...it'll make ur great poem even greater...!! :D
alle waah! thats a nice message :) say it b4 its too late !
and the second one by your friend is awesome! i loved it :)
Good one! You are become really poetic lately. :)
someone semms to b writin a lot of romantic stuff nowdayz...waz up dude ;)
that was really nice.
nice one friend..
the rhyming lines are just beautiful..!!
and the content too..!
Ah!
U r becoming more and more romantikk these days hmmm
I guess the tym to meet ur gal is coming closer...
and aparna's poem simply loved it on her blog also.
and lovely theme too...
Nice...
so, u r becoming a poet...
romantic poet .. :)
Sate and Pate are words?
Oops..
And you seem to be writing too much of romantic stff bro ;)
Nice one you put up, although I don’t agree with your friend’s views...Love is all about knowing.
My my...that was poetic Hems at his best..but why turning into Shakespeare all of a sudden? sooo rhyming...
appu wrote the second part?? gosh she has always been so good at it..nicely done :)
Beautiful lines! Though i cudnt read the 2nd one, the theme is nice :) So there is an amazing poet in u huh! keep up.
Where did my comment go?
Good try...!
abt falling in love...I guess now that Im older, I dun believe in falling in love that easily :)
Keshi.
Ah yea... the first few lines are pretty true...
Nice ones :)
Right said. :) And thats why i never leave an opportunity to say thank u and love u to my guy. I feel lucky to hav him.
wow the poems are so adorable....
and the second one was very well written ..kudos to ur frnd
whre you?
hey hemz u r writing poetics...? developer becomes a poetic
Hemz I dunno where u disappear to all the time...its quite draining to keep guessing where u r.
Keshi.
hey people...hemanth is having a plan ok deleting his blog page.he told me about it when i spoke 2 him the last time.He sounded very serious over this issue.I u ppl really like his blogging and dont want him to delete his blog account,plz try and stop him in some way.
Archana tnxx for the info!
Ok I dun u'stand WHY he's planning to delete his blog and and I dunno WHAT happened either.
I think its time I leave him alone. Cos not that any of my previous advice has been taken seriously either.
This time I'll let Hemz decide for himself. Cos Im tired.
Keshi.
Now shall i twist ur ear so that u would complete my tag????
wah ....Tu jo kabhi........
xcellent peom hemu......keep updating such wonderful , meaningful , poems..its really simply superb....
Nice poems hemanth..
U r really getting better with each one.. :)
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