Monday, October 6, 2008

Love


Love is all around

But, I am still alone in the pond

 

There is no music around

I am turning deaf with no sound

 

I look all around

Deep in the ocean, high in the sky but no one to be found

 

There is no one liking me around

This makes me feel like a gond


I try to go around

To find some love and have a bond

 

There is no reason for me to be around

When there is no one having fond

  

No one around

Better to bury myself in the ground


P.s: i updated my poem in Smiley Tissues tooo pls check it here

68 comments:

Priya Joyce said...

hey u seem to be in luv wth sumbody madly and haven't tols plz soon go and tell
luvely lines dear

Hemanth Potluri said...

@priya

u kiddin me...i am searching for some one dear..no one really there whom i am loving...some emotions fill me up wen i am alone..so after seeing this poem atleast someone may like me :D..:)..

urs..hemu..

Lucifer said...

hope u find ur love soon man :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

@mayz

hope is wat keeps me alive dude :).

urs..hemu..

Preeti said...

love cannot be searched. It jus happens over a period of time. So wait for it :) cheers..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@preeti..

i am not searching her ...i am trying to find my heart..not my reflection..yeh i am waiting from 24 years ..still i have time to wait :)..

urs..hemu..

Cess said...

what do u mean there is not reason for me to be around :( ut s sad.
Don t worry u will find her sweetie.
Remember walk Tall and confident :)

tc

C.

V. Archana said...

hahahaha..thats nice and amusing.
someone is trying to be Mr Romeo..
..in quest of Juliet.Good luck to you for that.Hope all we blog pals of yours are invited for the grand finale` :D
Regards,
Archana

Vinz said...

instead of burying yourself, y not start loving yourself..??

:)

Anwesa said...

i'v 2 agree wid vinz aka vinu..

david santos said...

I loved this post!
Have a nice week.

Anonymous said...

hey hemu...dont kid me man...u askin me to help u rhyme when u doin so nice on ur own?? :)

ps: u r definitely in love and haven't told her yet... go on fast and tell her those three magical words pal... she'll fall for u pukka!! ;)

Aneesh said...

Guess, someone is so desperate to get love.
it is better to bury yourself in the ground LOL
:)

Anonymous said...

hogayega yaar..thoda intezaar kar..it will come at the moment u least expect it to come..


thearmyguyspeaks.wordpress.com

Hemanth Potluri said...

@cess

some times its a feel that never ends ..:(..wat to do ..lets see wen i will find her..:)...

urs..hemu..

P.S:always tall and confident sweetie :)..thnks for that..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@archana

hahaha...i am still romeo ..may be i will die without finding her :(..but i want to see her atleast :(..may this become true atleast :)..

u r always welcome ...is the grand finale ..my death or finding her :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@vinu@anwesa

u wanted me to be single forever..huh!..i love myself and want to find some one who can like me for wat i am :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@david

thnks

u to have a nce week :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@vinay

hahah not good as u do dude..:)..but i am not in love dude..and i dint find the match..or she dint find me :(..still waiting hope i cud find her soon :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@aneesh


yeh little ...wat to do cant live single all the way :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@story teller..

thnks man...will visit u soon..:)..


urs..hemu..

lukkydivz said...

good one :D come out of the pond!

Hemanth Potluri said...

@div

heheh will try to come out and see wat ocean aa....ther wud be more loneliness then that of the pond :)..

urs..hemu..

Aparna said...

hope now i have posted at right place. :). By the way nice poem. who is the lucky girl you are searching for? you said you stay opp to beach. where opp to RK Beach?

Cheers
Aparna

Cinderella said...

Hemanth what the meaning of "gond" ?

Sameera Ansari said...

Looks like someone is on a poetry roll!Good attempt :)

Jessica said...

Good poetry! I hope it helped to write. :)

Solitaire said...

Maybe it is right next to you but because you are searching so hard in another direction, that you are unable to find it.

Keshi said...
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Keshi said...

Hemz plz snap out of DDLJ man.

Love is there yes...but its not gonna come to u in the form of a Kajol in a flower garden, all of a sudden, singing 'Tuje dekha tho ye jaana sanam'...


STOP THE SCENE RIGHT THERE...beep beep beep!


True Love is very different to wut we see in movies or read in some books...I was like u once...dreaming of a hunk coming and rescueing me from my Life prison's balcony :) But Love is much higher n deeper than that...it mite be in the very place ur not looking.


*HUGZ* keep smiling somehow.


Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@aparna

u posted it rite this time :P..hehe...

cant give my complete address on the blog...:)..

AT kalli mata temple..:)..i think u know wer it is located :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@cindy

gond means ..like being a forest people...being for themselves..like being lonely :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@sami

trying yaar..trying to reach ur level :P..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@jessica

thnks buddy...love dint help me....my heart helped me :P..lolz..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@sneha


if its rite next to me then it wont take this much time to convey..i am not searchin in one direction its all around i am searching :)..but could not find it :)..lets see wat fate decides..

urs..hemu..

Keshi said...

Also...


** There is no one liking me around This makes me feel like a gond


in that case all single ppl r GONDS? Well Im not :) U r who u BELIEVE to be.



Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi

Kajol in a flower garden, all of a sudden, singing 'Tuje dekha tho ye jaana sanam'...


hahahah ...lolz...rotfl...hahaha..i thought it wud be like dil chatha hai..lol..like i go to her marriage and stop it to get married to her ..:P..kiddin buddy..

**But Love is much higher n deeper than that...it mite be in the very place ur not looking.

yeh its true..but how could i know that i am looking in rite direction or not..as i said to sneha...i am looking 360 degrees but...i may miss it...may be if i am lucky enough i will get it this life...otherwise next time better luck :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi

**gond...it feels like i am lossing control over myslef some times i feel soo lonely..try to hurt myself very bad..like last nite ...i had very bad thoughts could not sleep the whole nite..some times ..i find no point in living ...but feel better to kill myself in the process..i am trying to control my feeling's :( with vain..

urs..hemu..

Keshi said...

Hemz u silly baby :)

**i thought it wud be like dil chatha hai..lol..like i go to her marriage and stop it to get married to her

wasnt that DRAMATIC scene in DDLJ? With that song 'mehendi laga ke rakna'?



**i am looking 360 degrees but

I didnt know u turned into a powerful telescope while looking for love! :):)


btw, wuts this hurting urself story? why do u do that? d u miss someone in ur life so much that u wanna end ur life? I dun get that Hemz. Look at me..I lost my dad when I was 16...I lost my darling nanna 5yrs ago...my ex got married to someone else...I basically hv no one except my mum n sis...but they r also not gonna be with me forever...nothing/nobody is permanent. So why r u hurting urself thinking abt something thats gonna be temporary anyways? U hv urself...learn to love him first and be ur own friend and lover.


*HUGS*

Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi

heheh its better for dil chahta hai then ddlj ..:P..

powerfull telescope ..heheh..naa i remember the aamir khan cycle race movie(quamat se quamat ) ..wer he has his lover by side all the time and searches for some one else ...who is no good for him :)..

i know yaar .. i am really srry abt ur dad..u told me that previously..and srry abt ur nanny to...and as for ur ex... i am not srry..i pity him that he lost u :D..

i love the person in me...i like him wen he is normal...but sometimes he gets out of control..starts acting weird and angry pushes so hard...i keep shouting as if i am a maniac...and i dont understand wat frnds say..i get pissed of wen some one does not trust me or anything...the other person is so bad...i try to kill him or get him out of me..but he keeps showing himself as soon as a small incident happen..its like i am becoming harvey dent the 2 face guy..:(..nothing but i can cry tats all.:'(...

urs..hemu..

Keshi said...

u just hv to stop depending on others for ur peace of mind...instead u depend on urself for ur own peace of mind.

TC Hemz!

Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi

thats the biggest problem i have kesh...i take all the advices from all my frnds and get irritated and do something stupid..:(...i am trying to over come all the bloody shit :(...have to try more hard now..:(..i know most people hate me for wat i am...and i am trying to over come tat..not u guys..but there r some fans who really care and send good mails to me daily with some vulgar words and shit all ..:)..

urs..hemu..

Keshi said...

Get over em Hemz! ppl will always judge and say this n that.

We r all hated and liked by someone out there. Ur not alone.

Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi

people who like me also stop commenting and calling me ..wen i stop messaging them or calling them hahaah..i should get used to be with myself only then...and take a break from this internet and leave it for some months..


urs..hemu..

Keshi said...

I dun u'stand u Hemz...I thought the last tuime u came bak u were happy...and that was like only few days ago. Now u say ur sick of blogs again.

mebbe u should decide urself this time.

Keshi.

Keshi said...

**time

peter said...

awww....seems like a self-check with desires over pouring from evrywhere.

nice post there !

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi

not sick of blogs ...thats wat i am saying ...ok leave it..i am not able to make any one understand anything ...srry for wasting ur time have a gud one :)..

urs..hemu..

$oma $ekhar said...

Hi raaaaaa
Chaala baagundi...
We shud not go in search of LOVE...
LOVE shud cum searchin U....

Thats LOVE..pure LOVE....
Wait until u get PURE LOVE !!

Keshi said...

**and take a break from this internet and leave it for some months

this doesnt mean sick of blogs?

Keshi.

Keshi said...

No one will understand anyone else fully. So stop trying to make ppl u'stand u Hemz. Its not possible. We can only come close to it.


TC anyways!

Keshi.

Keshi said...

And come n read my reply to ya in my blog :)

Keshi.

Cяystal said...

Don't wait for love to come to you..fall in love with yourself! ;)

Lovely lines,brother..


Have a great week!

ceedy said...

Ok atleast when you bury yourself...be happy the bugs and work will love you :P


Remember love is a feeling not a tangible entity....you cannot search for it...it has to be felt

Vani said...

Nice poem hemanth..U seem so ready to fall in love vit some1 :)

Keshi said...

Hemz I agree with Ceedy...it cannot be searched for, it can only be felt.

Now where r ya?


Keshi.

Keshi said...

Come n check out my Today's post Hemz...there's something for u at the end of it :)

Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@ayushi

thnks sissy ..LOve ya..:)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@ceedy@keshi

hmm let me thing abt it :)..thnks for that ..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi

srry da..not replied ...dont misunderstand..:)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@sekhar

thnks buddy i agree with u its just a thought so dont fall fr it :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@vani

thnks so much buddy :)..

urs..hemu..

P.S: i will come to ur clinic very soon :)..

Cяystal said...

Come check out the fun on my blg,bro! :)

Kumiththa said...

Very nice lines. Best of luck to find your girl soon:)

Kumiththa said...

Very nice lines. Best of luck to find your girl soon:)

Kumiththa said...

Very nice lines. Best of luck to find your girl soon:)

Saranya S said...

Good lucks hemanth!
nice lines btw :)

Phoenix said...

*hugs*

im sure you ll get the one who is made specially for you.. because you deserve nothing but the best :)