There was a big Blast
it was very vast
i thought it was my last
so i ran out very fast
what i saw there gave me a shock and stood like a mast
the surprise was most of my buddies from the past
they all dressed up like movie cast
saying "Happy Diwali "
it was very vast
i thought it was my last
so i ran out very fast
what i saw there gave me a shock and stood like a mast
the surprise was most of my buddies from the past
they all dressed up like movie cast
saying "Happy Diwali "
Hello guys and gals Happy Diwali..hope u liked the poem :P...Have a good time in blasting ur crackers not ur butts :P...burn less money ..srry less fire crackers ..be a little eco-friendly..:)..u can read abt our festival over here
Happy Diwali
urs..hemu..
urs..hemu..
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HAPPY DIWALI MONKEYYYY!!! :D
anni "-ast" ani end ayaindi..otti last line eee... :P
happy Diwali
hemzii
njoyyyy
:)
hahaha cool one again :)
happy diali!
@archana
u r monkey ...tupid monkkey :P..
its just a poem so no limits or last line...i will end with something different next time :P...
urs..hemu..
@priya
thnks dear...have a gr8 diwali to u too :)
urs..hemu..
@divz
thnks buddy ...chala rojulu tarvatha ekadiki velav :(..naa accident post chudu..
wish u the same :)..
urs..hemu..
Nice lines. :)
Happy and safe Diwali, Hemanth.
There were times in the past
That I felt like your poetry should be murdered and tied up the mast
Life's experiences have a list so vast
That you need to forget the past and scream
HAPPPPPPPPPPPPPYY DIWALI,YOU APE! :P :P :D
:)
(The above comment was from me,Hemz!)
:)
hey hemu happies the diwalies :):) have a blast :)
happy Diwali !
@mitra
thnks buddy..:) wish u the same :)..
urs..hemu..
@crystal
well calling me ape was bad move..:P..since ur my sis..u become one of a kind to :P..
Happy diwali sis ..
P.S: if u dont like my poems tel me na :P..i will stop them :)..
urs..hemu..
@preeti
thnk u so much buddy :)..wish u the same ..:)..
urs..hemu..
@cindy
wish u the same cindy :)..
urs..hemu..
very well indeed. play safe and be safe. better to be eco friendly for you and others around you.
take care and
happy and safe diwali
cheers aparna
nice one hemu
happy diwali to u and ur family and all our blogger frnds....
be careful and njoy the festival
Interesting Hemu! Thanks for sharing! :)
what a crakling rhyme it is! :)
hemu! pls tell me the secret abt how cud u write such sweet n cute rhymes?.. i promise i won't tell anyone. :p
wish u too a very happy diwali. enjoyyyyyyyyyyyyy :)
lolz so cute and cool!! :)
you did great job!
@aparna
thnks da...wish u the same ..
urs..hemu..
@yamini
thnks yaar..wish u the same :)..
urs..hemu..
@jessica..
:)...always there to share u something :).
urs..hemu..
@preeti
thnks dear :)..
***hemu! pls tell me the secret abt how cud u write such sweet n cute rhymes?.. i promise i won't tell anyone. :p
hahah...bosst is secret of my energy :P....lol..kiddin dear..:).
i dont have a big secret its just wat i feel comes out of my words :)...i will tell u something soon :)..
urs..hemu..
@preeti
forgot
wish u a happy diwali :) and enjoy it dear :)..
urs..hemu..
@lena
thnks buddy :)..will try more..if u spport me like this :P..:)..
urs..hemu..
First I was thinking there was a bomb blast lol!
Happy Diwali Hemz! :)
Keshi.
@kesh
**First I was thinking there was a bomb blast lol!
if it was a bomb blast how wud i be there to rite this :p..heheh...
Wish u a Happy Diwali..:)..
urs..hemu..
u cud hv been watching it from afar? duh Hemz! LOL!
Keshi.
Happy diwali.........
that's good rhyme.hope u have a blast this diwali.....
Happy Diwali Hemanth :)
and ur poem is nice!
@keshi
i like playing with them :p..heheh..watching from far wat is the use :P..
urs..hemu..
@aparna
thnks buddy ..wish u the same..will have a blast for sure :)..
urs..hemu..
@saranya
thnks buddy...wish u the same :)..
urs..hemu..
oh i saw now...!! had frgt to comment i guess...
very original work hemmzy!! :D
happy diwali!!
@vinay
:p..its original only..i dont have duplicate..:P..hehhe..
wish u the same buddy :)..
urs..hemu..
Happy Diwali Hemu. Great Poem
@kiran
thnks yaar ..wish u the same :)..
urs..hemu..
Nice poem!!!!!
Happy diwali....
:)
@aneesh
thnks man...belated wishes to u :)..
urs..hemu..
Happy belated deewali friend..
hope ur day was filled with crackers, lighting and fun..!!
:)
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