Friday, October 3, 2008

Dear


oh dear my

y r u so high

unreachable in the sky

i just found a lie

were the truth is shy

to be untold in a fly

let me atleast try

to make u understand that i am just a normal guy

who is full of sentiments and always ready to cry
urs..hemu..

P.S:not meant for anyone

65 comments:

Priya Joyce said...

hey !! lovely lines by Hemz

btw who's this dear?

Lucifer said...

nice rhyme dude :)

Keshi said...

wow really nice one! Full of emotions and longing for someone to u'stand ya...

Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@priya..

its u dear :P..just kiddin..i had one person in my mind wen i rote it..:)..but can tell it out :)..will mail ya..:P..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@mayz

thnks dude :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi..

u got me rite..its searching for the person who really cares me for wat i am :)..and i am not able to find her since 24 years :(..

urs..hemu..

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ said...

wohaaaa.
hemu the poet is on fire :P

Hemanth Potluri said...

@daydreamer

dude...its not fire..but trying to bring the other side up :)..

urs..hemu..

Keshi said...

**and i am not able to find her since 24 years

not that u cud hv found her when u were 2yrs old Hemz! :)

listen, dun be so sad tho...ur only 24...u hv alot of time to find the girl who wud like n love u for who u r. Everything has a perfect TIME...and u cant hurry love.


Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi

wen i was 2 years she wud have been 2 years ...dont u watch movies ...the moment they r born they r made for each other lol :P..

its not hurrying up...but sort of loneliness filling in me..without a perfect gal..so i am trying to fast forward the things :)...i really need a remote from the movie click to go to the future and see the gal who is for me and ...come bac to the past and find her now itself ..to fill in the loneliness ..

urs..hemu..

Keshi said...
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Keshi said...

Hemz it looks like u watch DDLJ 24/7...snap out of it plz!

btw, how can u be so 'lonely' when u hv so many friends? I think u just want a girl to kiss? lol!


Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi

i dont watch ddlj that much..lol..:P..

i have soo many freidns ..not one gf lol :P..huh kiss..this is new thing i dint think of...hmmmm so if i have gf ..i have permission to kiss her :O.:P..lol..:D..

urs..hemu..

Keshi said...

**if i have gf ..i have permission to kiss her

u need permission to kiss ur GF? wut is she, a jail officer?

Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi...

how cud i know wat she is lol...may be she becomes my project lead ..:P..and i wont have permission to kiss :P..ok then u brought a new thought of kissin now :P..should find a gf now to kiss lol :P..

urs..hemu..

Keshi said...

dun tell me u didnt think of a kiss ever? omg where d u live Hemz, in Madagascar jungles??!!!

Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi..

i did think ...but wats the use without having a gf..gals dont give out kisses :P..lol..

yeh i dont live in Madagascar jungles but in software jungles ...its similar to the jungles u said ...cant think for ourselves only freaky coding....

urs..hemu..

Keshi said...

u code too? in wut?

Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi

ur asking my domain ..then its java..ur speaking to a sun certified professional :P..

haahah

urs..hemu..

Keshi said...

Java..its ancient now lol! How abt C#?


Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

i worked on c# from 2007 jan to 2088 jan..was bored ...i jump from c# to php and java..u know i love to be in multiple technologies and cleared mcsd certification.long bac...now i am really tired of software..:(..

urs..hemu..

Keshi said...

me too..Im sick of PCs and coding...I need to get outta here!!!!

Keshi.

Anwesa said...

so who do u think is so far away?

Aneesh said...

not meant for anyone?
That speaks a lot
:)

Anonymous said...

goodwork!

Vinz said...

nice rhyme friend..

and 'ready to cry'made me laugh.. i personally feel we should be never ready to cry..yeah crying is good..it relieves our grief..but making our mind ready for that weakens ourselves...thats my perspective..!!

cheers..!!

Preeti said...

Nice pic:) conveys immense sorrow..

Sameera Ansari said...

Awww!Hope they read this somehow.I really don't believe it's not meant for anyone :P

Cess said...

too bad, would have been great to direct to someone :)
I m feeling better, still not happy at work but i decided to not let me down because of it anymore!

tc

C.

Vani said...

Nice lines hemanth. I like that picture too.

Hemanth Potluri said...

@keshi..

that makes 2 of us to get away from computer's :)..thats the reason i am saying lets run away..P

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@anwesa

trying to find the person buddy..still in the search :)..:P

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@aneesh

:)..not meant for anyone?

s dude i know it speaks a lot..but actually its not meant..:P.


urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@aparna


u know it y i rote it :P.. thanks..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@vinu

crying makes weak some times but it lets our the stupid thoughts and gets be bac to myself :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@preeti..

thnks yaar..:)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@sameera

hehehe no sami really not meant for anyone...it just came from a scene i saw in tv :)..and searching for a gf..:)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@cess

it wud really be gr8 if i directed it to someone...but there is no one there that i missed...as u all frnds r with me...so u got to search me a gf now :P..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@vani

thnks so much yaar :)..

urs..hemu..

Anonymous said...

hey hemu...u r awesome poet too yaar...but who is the dear?? ;)

ps: got the invite, joined too...but have no clue as to how to put my blog in that blog list, guess that is upto u...!! :)

V. Archana said...

:)

Cяystal said...

Full of emotions!
Simple and straight!..nice one.


PS_avoid using SMS language,bro :)

And srry..i couldn't reply to yr last post!

yamini meduri said...

something different this time...
good one as usual

joie de vivre said...

shorrt n simple!!

Saranya S said...

Very cute and nice one hemanth!
:)

Hemanth Potluri said...

@vinay

thnks dude..trying something new :)..no one is there as dear :P..just trying to find her :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@archana


heheh :P..:D..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@ayushi

no problem sis..come by when you are free..and yeh i would modify my next poem without the sms thingy..lol :P...thanks u reminded me how lazy i am becoming :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@yamini

thnks buddy...yeh different side of me :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@neha

thnks buddy...following some ideas from u :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@saranya

thnks so much yaar :)..

urs..hemu..

prajyot said...

hemu is back with a bang..lovely post..!!

missing who huh??

Hemanth Potluri said...

@prajyot

thnks dude..no one..just a internal feeling of missin my gf..and trying to find one for myself :)..

urs..hemu..

prajyot said...

wellkeep finding and when u find one,do post nice pics in ut poster blogs..heading of the blog as " EUREKA..FINALLY GOTTACHA"

he he..!!!

Anonymous said...

hey dropped here after PJ's recommendation. Nice blog u seem to have -- full of emotions and intense posts. if you dont mind, i wud like to read them....

Hemanth Potluri said...

@buzz

sure buddy welcome to read and comment on any of them ..it wud be my pleasure that u like them :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@prajyot..


i wud not post pics of my lover dude :P..

urs..hemu..

Anonymous said...

Thanks Buddy. You are welcome to read mine as well :)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

lovely and a touchy poem.

take care
:):):)

lukkydivz said...

:D kiska asar hai? :O i can see a budding poet in u ;)

Hemanth Potluri said...

@preeti

hi welcome to my world :)..thnks for the comment visit for more :)..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

@div

thnks buddy welcome bac :)..

urs..hemu..

ceedy said...

Not meant for anyone - so are you trying to save it for the future - just in case you have to use it????

dont know if to call you an optimist that you will find someone or a pessimist that she will leave you in a lurch :)

Aparna said...

definatly ment for someone :). now come on tell tell.. :)

cheers
aparna

Phoenix said...

wow intense very intense :)